Continuity Check Failure

4 03 2012

I got started on 20 today and realized I had Mo al-Omari in two places at once. Here in 19 he is on Cardoman but in Chapter 16 I sent him off with the Rymans on the good ship Lying Bastard. It made more sense to change chapter 16 than rewrite his part in 19, so Leo Lotti is now with the Rymans.

I edited 16 here to reflect that fact. No other changes in 16 or 19 just replaced Mo with Lotti in the earlier chapter. Now back to work on 20.

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